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|Aura Star| Chapter 9: Lies “I can’t believe you,” hissed a voice. I paused. That was Nekros. Was he mad at Aima for something? Maybe for losing a thrush or a vole? “What were you thinking?” he continued. “She’s my sister. I couldn’t just run away from her,” Aima’s shy mew made me freeze. I felt my blood turn cold. They’re talking about me! Right over my head while they think I’m asleep. “No offense Aima, but your hunting skills could use a bit more work. But Kardia?” I held back a shudder as he spat my name. “She’s as weak as a mouse! Scared of her own shadow. Now she’s wasting up our food, AND that Splatter cat could be looking for her, trying to hunt her down. We’re in danger because you brought this idiot here.” “She’s our sister…” came her weak reply. I felt a breez
|Aura Star| Chapter 8: Changes Aima babbled on and on about how she and Nekros had woken up and saw that Pyros and Dakana were dead and Nekros decided that they should go to the city. She talked about everything, the first vole they caught, the first river they swam in. Eventually we arrived at a tall wooden shape. A windmill. We entered it and began climbing old mossy stairs until we reached a room with grass and moss covering some areas, as well has hay barrels stacked up in a few places. There was a foggy glass window and I saw red eyes stare at us. The shadow walked toward us. He touched noses to Aima first, smiling, before he frowned and looked at me. My brother circled me like he was questioning an intruder before attacking. He glared over at Aima and they had a silent conversation with their eyes. I coughed, “Um hello? “ Nekros looked over and shook his head. He bounded over to me and we touched noses. “Kardia,” he muttere
Saliteria's DreamSaliteria feel asleep. She soon had a weird dream that Rhen had gone insane. She stood at the entrance of camp, her eyes were wide with shock. She saw rabbits, with deer legs! There were also Squirrels with 8 legs and bird wings. And on the North Rock, Rhen was there. She was laughing. It sounded like a "hee-haw hee-haw". As Rhen was laughing her muzzle pushed and grew into a horse's muzzle. Her paws grew and mutated into a cheetah's, a crocodile's, an eagle's and an ant's. Saliteria's jaw dropped. This would be a great dream for Kandra to give to someone. Rhen's body grew into a ant's abdomen the size of a master bedroom bed. Her wings stretched and grew along with her body. Rhen's ears doubled in size and her tail puffed and grew into a giant bunny tail. Rhen then grew to the size of 2 cars. She grabbed a pile of dirt with the eagle foot and stuffed it in her mouth. The ground rumbled. Rhen began grabbing things (a tree, boulders, cars, etc.) and eating them. When